Yesterday was the deadline for our 10-15 minute films, and whilst my rushed edit was perfunctory at best, our Director’s cut was nothing less than the best film my course has yet seen. Due to scheduling issues there was one scene we weren’t able to shoot in time for the deadline, but the film (just about) hangs together without it. Having a completed cut has allowed us to re-approach said scene to make it as powerful and fitting as it can possibly be, and it’s been a fun challenge to find a way to fit new material into a gap which has to barely advance the plot, whilst simultaneously making the whole stronger. I’m looking forward to shooting it and seeing if it works as intended!

Road Map
The picture above is from the planning stages of my Final Major Project, for which, true to form, I’ve elected to make a short fiction film. We had to pitch back in January and I rushed through a unfocused, sprawling mess of a script which I’ve spent every spare moment since trying to fix. I eventually went back to basics (via a drawn out time-travel story element, which I’ve thankfully dropped) and rebuilt the film from the ground up, finally finishing a treatment tonight that I’m far, far happier with. One of the key moments in working the story out came just over a week ago when, after writing pages of scrappy notes that asked more questions than they answered, I flipped my pad on the side and drew the poles of the story. I figured out each character’s position relative to where the story started and finished, and then was able to pick out the mid-point. I stopped looking at the story in terms of three acts and instead applied the Eight Sequences, which suggested events more directly, and ultimately led me to find the conclusion I needed. After the plot points were in place the act breaks fell naturally, and I was able to complete a vague treatment immediately.
Now, time is running out. I’ve made act breakdowns over the last two days, and tonight was able to write a full, scene-by-scene treatment that still revealed some pleasant surprises to me. After a solid night’s sleep I’m going to look at the story again, identify if anything needs fixing, and then get writing. My lovely Producer wants a script by Sunday; with how pumped I feel right now that’ll be no problem at all.
I probably love this part the most, but I can’t wait until the lights are up and the cameras start rolling either. Film-making, just, let me count the ways…
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